This is page two.
A buddy of mine entered the Zuda contest a couple of years before me, and has since decided to redo the entire look and pacing of his idea. Taking a cue from my friend, I've decided to lengthen the pacing of this story. This will also help to address a critique that I agree with from some who commented on my story while it was in the contest. That critique was that the comic was too wordy. I intend keep the same amount of descriptive narration and dialogue, only spread over many more pages.
The Fall of Inkazimulo is a 2010 Copyright of Aaron Watts
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